Nanba, The plot is very good. This is a bit long to be a haiku and a bit short for a poem. For eg. for a haiku... use simple and short words... like 'thaniyakavae' instead of 'thananthaniyakavae'..... good one da ...keep tham coming... btw was mine very confusing (both the stories)????
nanba.. thanks for comments.. Ithu haiku vo poem o try pannala.. summa dialogue a potten.... First story was nice.. second than kadaisiyila nee enna sola varen nu puriyala....celebrity voice story...
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Nanba,
The plot is very good. This is a bit long to be a haiku and a bit short for a poem. For eg. for a haiku... use simple and short words... like 'thaniyakavae' instead of 'thananthaniyakavae'..... good one da ...keep tham coming... btw was mine very confusing (both the stories)????
nanba.. thanks for comments..
Ithu haiku vo poem o try pannala.. summa dialogue a potten....
First story was nice..
second than kadaisiyila nee enna sola varen nu puriyala....celebrity voice story...
that was the 3rd one da...i will explain in detail... 2nd one was in tamil.... did u read that...?
ya i read that da.. a different plot. pain of loneliness and expecting a companian to his character... Aazmanathin ulvelippadu
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